Legacy of a Warrior 2: Path of a Martyr

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Legacy of a Warrior 2: Path of a Martyr

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Legacy of a Warrior, the first story. wrote: Private Curtis Hollin - one of the most promising soldiers in the Confederate army - stationed at the GUR (Grest Ultimate Reservoir) the largest mineral and vespene reservoir in the newly Confederate planet Grest and its small government. Under Colonel Joseph Guellar they held perimeter of the reservoir for 3 years during the massive Sons of Korhal rebellion against the Confederacy, they even forced the Grest government out of the reservoir and to their outposts and capital city making the reservoir their own personal matter.

After 3 years of safeguarding the reservoir and helping funding and producing their defences against the Sons of Korhal, they are found out! On the outskirts of the Grest government territory, Colonel Guellar with a large battalion accompanied by Private Curtis Hollin meet for a convoy of the Sons of Korhal led by Major Stewart Roberson, the Major tries to get the Confederates to surrender the reservoir and turn to the Sons of Korhal/Dominion. They declined.

The Major planted a homing beacon which in five minutes near six drop-ships landed to the ground carrying a large battalion of marines, the Major took a quick shot at the Colonel into the chest killing him instantly, which a cat like reflects caused Private Curtis Hollin to shoot back at the Major which took as a hostile act causing the Dominion to attack the Confederates at point blank range. Private Hollin and the battalion retreated to the forests and did guerrilla attacks and won a small victory there promoting him to Lieutenant Curtis Hollin for his quick thinking.

When they returned to the reservoir they heard reports of a massive base of Korhal troops attacking the outposts in relentless frenzies. What they didn't know is two of the troops under Lieutenant Hollin had small emitters on them known as 'Psi emitters' which freaked the troops out because they could not destroy them either. They knew and imminent threat is coming, a large army of Sons of Korhalian troops are coming, along with an unlimited source of Zerg are coming from the stars... with Curtis Hollin in control an elite warrior - the legacy of his defence of his men has come - three large battalions of Korhallian troops arrived at the entrance of the reservoir and an unknown soldier screams out "Soon the Zerg will arrive and this will end just like Antiga Prime!" they charged towards the defence and shots began to fire back and forth. The Confederacy has the government of Grest to assist them as they send in the cavalry.


... far away in the stars a massive amount of Zerg warp into space and begin to circle around Grest answering the call of the Psi-Emitters ...

It’s been over a year since the war on Grest. Life has not changed. The Sons of Korhal have continued their advance on the Confederacy and have lost most of their powers except on few of the fringe worlds. The Confederates have threatened in a nuclear holocaust of the fringe planets to stay under their rule. The insect-like Zerg have been used as tools of both the Confederates and Sons of Korhal, most notably on Tarsonis and Grest.

In one of the most epic battles in history between the Sons of Korhal and Confederates happened on the very soil of Grest. Which lasted near seven months, led by the courageous Curtis Hollin, the Confederates were able to hold out a losing battle against the Sons of Korhal at the Grestian reservoir even after the Grest government had betrayed them. Curtis Hollin alongside his new found allies, the Ironvault Pirates retook the burning reservoir and held out for hours of constant battling as the Zerg arrived and rampaged the land, where not even the combined armies of the three armies could defeat.

The Watcher, who is known as “The Bringer of Destruction” called forth Tassadar, who led the fleet to purge Grest, which turned the planet to nothing but smoldering desert. Even against the best wishes, the psi-ley energies again grew the resources, and the Sons of Korhal returned to harvest the rest of the minerals. Before the purge, Curtis Hollin was found alive among the piles of broken bones of his soldiers and Zerg while severely bleeding but was spotted and killed by the Zerg.

Justin Smith of the Ironvault Pirates narrowly escaped to the planet of Sarl’ar, a peace fringe world not ruled by the claws of the Confederacy or under constant siege from the Sons of Korhal or Zerg. On the fringe world, Justin Smith traveled to under his last order by his high commander Curtis Hollin to find his son, Brendan Hollin or known now by his Ghost ID: 73AB. In honor of the noble death and beliefs of Curtis Hollin, Justin Smith with whatever forces he had left formed the Ironvault Avengers, bent on revenge on Mengsk and the Sons of Korhal, similar to Raynor’s Raiders but only for a difference purpose.

At the planet of Arluien, unknown to the war or the Zerg, the “Xenomorphs” attacked in a massive wave-after-wave onslaught until the burned down the entire capital city. Only a handful survived due to the interference of Hollin and saved their leader David Sanchez an adept goliath pilot. But due to the Confederacy strict policy they didn’t dare help them and believed the Zerg weren’t attacking and were delusional enough to just silence the propaganda and nuked the entire planet, killing off any surviving humans that didn’t escape.

With Sanchez, not only are General Justin Smith’s forces outnumbered by the Sons of Korhal and near their infancy but also out numbered by the Confederacy that has changed since the time of Curtis Hollin and are irrational and delusional and believe every force is against them. But now against all odds, everyone believes in Justin Smith and Curtis Hollin as they take “The Path of the Martyr…”

… The war to end all wars, is on the Path of Martyrs …

Major Characters:
Brendan Hollin (Ghost ID: 73AB)
Brendan Hollin was born to Curtis Hollin but was put on the planet Sarl’ar while he was shipped to Grest and ended becoming a major war between the Confederacy and Sons of Korhal. Unknown of his father’s heroic death he become a normal soldier in the militia until just a year ago. Justin Smith arrived on the planet and told Hollin the story of his father’s death. Trained by Smith, he become a dangerous ghost and harnessed his small but formidable psionic power.

General Justin Smith
Justin Smith served as leading commander of the Ironvault Pirates and served under Curtis Hollin as they defended the reservoir against the Sons of Korhal and the traitorous Grest Government. He narrowly escaped the Zerg’s clutches and went under the final order of Curtis to find his son. Under his guidance they formed a freedom fighter-like group to honor the martyr Curtis Hollin and get revenge on the Korhallian rebellion.

Stacy Sedguchei
A female who later joined the freedom fighters due to the persuasion of Brendan Hollin who have been friends since childhood, she admitted to liking Brendan but was rejected due to Hollin recently hearing of his father’s death and joining to get revenge. She is one excellent sniper with many ghost-like qualities.

David Sanchez
Sanchez is the leader in which was under siege by the Zerg wave-after-wave onslaught and was left for dead by the defeating Confederacy and it took Hollin to save him before his entire army was destroyed. Though the planet was just moments after escape nuked to a desert, told Hollin and Smith of the change of the Confederacy after years of this war, in which now Smith must also fight a delusional government.

Admiral Valerian Brennan
Admiral Valerian is the commanding officer of the Zeta Squadron of the Confederacy that is in constant struggles with General Smith. He doesn’t seem to listen to reality when told that Smith isn’t a Korhallian. He leads the Zeta Squadron in dire consequences against both Smith and the Sons of Korhal. He is shot dead by Brendan Hollin after General Justin Smith dies crashing into his behemoth cruiser.

Lt. Commander Steven Yvette.
Steven is the commander of the Sons of Korhal troops against General Smith’s forces. He like the Admiral pilots a massive battle cruiser and wages open war with the Zeta Squadron, and General Smith. He cuts off many out side sources trading with General Smith’s group, especially the Kel-Morian Combine. He also stages many attempts to kill General Smith and Hollin. At the final battle between Hollin and Yvette (after Smith dies) after Yvette kidnaps Stacy which forced Hollin to eliminate him while Yvette mocked his father. Yvette’s ship is later then ambushed by Zerg while the Zerg battle both forces and the remnants of the Confederacy, and becomes infested and chases Hollin and Stacy before being killed why they escape.

The Watcher (Z’Lura)
The Watcher is a Dark Templar, which was revealed at the planet of Grest and ordered the purging under the commander Tassadar. He noticed first on Admiral Valerian’s cruiser when General Smith died and the power of Brendan Hollin to revive himself and stop most of the dangerous debris from killing him permantley. When he was surrounded by many elite shock troopers, the Watcher revealed and saved him giving him the name of Z’Lura, with the Zerg fast approaching, Z’Lura warped the remaining Ironvault fleet away to the surface with what little Protoss forces he had to later helped in defeating the Sons of Korhallian forces. He later escapes when a horde of Zerg led by the infested Steven Yvette, after killing Yvette he escapes allowing just enough time for Hollin and Stacy to escape to the surface of the planet before the ship implodes.

Screenshots:
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The outer outpost surveying the area.

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The Zerg destroy the outpost.

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The barricade cant hold!

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David Sanchez and the capital

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The entrance to the city is under siege.

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Ambush!

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They're all alone on the planet...

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The Zerg rampage through the streets...

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Yet another barricade cant hold against the Zerg might!

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The number of Zerg flyers block the sun...

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The final standpoint, the entrance of the capital city.

More coming soon!
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Adding another screenshot of the first interlude

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Brendan Hollin arrives to save David Sanchez from the Zerg's rampage and the soon-to-come Confederates nuclear bombardment.
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It looks impressive. It also shows me what will happen in the map in nice detail.
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Cool stuff gl man  ;)
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Nice of you to join us once more and post on your project. I expect to see more of this soon.
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UPDATE: Finally! I just finished working on level two, feed back is appreciated.

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Entrance to the dropship.

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The first sightings of Zerg...

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Some have fallen to dementia of recent attacks...

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Some have fallen victim to the Singing Horror

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And there she rests...

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The mass of Zerg stuck!

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Is this the marine that was 'killed' by his friend Jamie?

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The Zerg have took control of the traps against you!

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She has hatched!

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The infestor!

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With the Horror dead, her corruption over the cannons and cockpit has been lifted!

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The infestor has risen your fallen comrades against you!

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They're everywhere, you best be careful. The doors dont close!

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Sanchez is able to take over the console to override the radiation

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Control the probe to override the radiation system.

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The backup generator.

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It's yours now...

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Smith has returned!

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Now lets get the hell away from here!
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UPDATE (Continued)
As usual I hate to double post but I finished two more maps (one cut scene) and I decided to take a few screenshots:

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Another freedom fighter-like group seems to be on the same page as yours...

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Raynor's Raiders help your cause...

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The Confederates wage war here as well...

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The Sons of Korhal took some of your scientists as captives!

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FFA! (Sons of Korhal vs Zerg vs Freedom Fighters!

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Lately Brendan is under alot of stress with the little resources he has, Stacy's nagging isnt helping!

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Steven Yvette takes Stacy under his wing as his "queen"!

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In every jail, NEVER drop the soap...

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A year ago, Stacy and Hollin were truly in love... Hollin realizes the mistakes he made that led to what has happened now...

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Stacy sent a message to Brendan telling her shes "under attack" is it a trap?

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Hollin admits his attitude towards Stacy was wrong, and he plans to write his wrongs on this...
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Impressive, Marine. Your screenshots are great, as always. :)

Oh, and I like the Raynor's Raiders vs Zerg vs Sons of Korhal idea. ;)
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Your campaign looks very promising, like your others.
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Looks good, Marine. I suggest you get some webspace somewhere to showcase the screenshots. That way you can get get them organized and you won't have to keep adding things to this thread. Oh yeah, and don't post TOO many screenies, I don't want to know what your campaign is about before I've had a chance to play it. :p
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