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Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:46 am
by Pr0nogo
Inhumanity;
It's all I see
When I look at you
And see what you do.

How can you pronounce
These two not guilty?
Look at their faces
They do not appear to be.

Their cuts and bruises
Are not self-imposed.
Reasons behind them
Still remain unknown.

My cry for justice
Has still gone unheard,
And so I leave you
With my last few words.

Testaments ruined.
Glories sacrificed.
It amazes me how
You have yet to die.
I do not have proof
Outside of my mind,
But cut me open
And that's what you'll find.

That's all you will find.
That's all you will need.
Imprison these men.
For naught but their deeds.

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 8:43 am
by tipereth
Why rhyme without flow?

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:17 pm
by Pr0nogo
Read it as 5 syllables per line except for 'They do not appear to be.'

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:24 pm
by Whiplash!
I've always found poems so lame -_-

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:29 pm
by Pr0nogo
Whiplash! wrote: I've always found poems so lame -_-
Why do you read them then?

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Mon Dec 28, 2009 3:17 pm
by FlyingHat
Pr0nogo wrote:
Whiplash! wrote: I've always found poems so lame -_-
Why do you read them then?
How do you know if he bothered to read the poem?

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 12:59 am
by Negi
My post was deleted, but I still think that you're lame.

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 5:43 am
by Pr0nogo
Negi wrote: My post was deleted, but I still think that you're lame.
Why the fuck do you even bother posting?
FlyingHat wrote: How do you know if he bothered to read the poem?
Well, I assumed he did. I suppose that I don't know for sure.

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 12:28 pm
by Negi
Because I'm a better person than you are.

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 12:56 pm
by Marco
Campaign Creations is like a small town.  Lavarinth is like the sheriff.  Negi is like the town drunk:  everyone knows him, no one respects him, and you can count on him to make an ass of himself.  Sheriff just has to keep slapping the wrist of the town drunk cause the town drunk is never more than just a slight nuisance.

Pretend to read all of Negi's posts as if he were drunk all the time.  Suddenly his ramblings aren't even annoying, and might even be mildly comical.

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 3:38 pm
by Lavarinth
Desler wrote: Pretend to read all of Negi's posts as if he were drunk all the time.  Suddenly his ramblings aren't even annoying, and might even be mildly comical.

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Tue Dec 29, 2009 8:29 pm
by Negi
My posts are canonical, not comical. 

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 1:50 am
by Zilla-
i lold

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 5:10 am
by Pr0nogo
Way to fucking derail the thread, guys.

Re: Inhumanity (a poem)

Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 9:30 am
by Marco
Pr0nogo wrote: Way to fucking derail the thread, guys.
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