Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:30 pm
Also happy new goat!
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Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:27 pm
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:03 am
My president is black, my Lambo's blue
And I'll be goddamned if my rims ain't too
My momma ain't at home, and daddy's still in jail
Tryna make a plate, anybody seen the scale?
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:57 pm
Well I for one enjoyed reading your poetry, Pronogo. 
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:22 pm
O, tnx.
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:44 pm
Reading the poem, my first thought was me wondering what prompted you to write it. Is it just a creative piece, or is this a statement of something you personally experienced?
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:39 am
Get a room, you two.
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 2:08 am
Guy writes a line
Makes it rhyme
Five beats makes his face shine.
But no one takes it
Makes it cheap
Some call it a heap
Some mistake it
I think it's fine
Don't whine.
HAH!
Gotta be tougher
Negi's a bluffer
All face and no grace
Expect that in a public place
like Campaign Creations
What a sensation
to share your thoughts
your words your emotions.
Son, you actin' all weak
gets you a demotion.
Pr0nogo, no-no
Cryin' 'cause they ain't buyin'
That path's a no-go.
Post a poem, bet your britches,
Inner talent brings out all the...eh...ehm...*cough*
Yeah, so...
Cheer up Pr0n. And listen to criticism 'cause you may learn something.
But don't criticize me 'cause I already know everything and if you think you have something to say to that, well I've already thought about it and that's why I said it. To lull you in to say what you think you'll say.
SO DON'T SAY IT.
Makes it rhyme
Five beats makes his face shine.
But no one takes it
Makes it cheap
Some call it a heap
Some mistake it
I think it's fine
Don't whine.
HAH!
Gotta be tougher
Negi's a bluffer
All face and no grace
Expect that in a public place
like Campaign Creations
What a sensation
to share your thoughts
your words your emotions.
Son, you actin' all weak
gets you a demotion.
Pr0nogo, no-no
Cryin' 'cause they ain't buyin'
That path's a no-go.
Post a poem, bet your britches,
Inner talent brings out all the...eh...ehm...*cough*
Yeah, so...
Cheer up Pr0n. And listen to criticism 'cause you may learn something.
But don't criticize me 'cause I already know everything and if you think you have something to say to that, well I've already thought about it and that's why I said it. To lull you in to say what you think you'll say.
SO DON'T SAY IT.
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 10:07 am
I felt like I should be standing behind you making beat box noises.
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 2:52 pm
Ever heard of Law-Abiding Citizen?thebrowncloud wrote: Reading the poem, my first thought was me wondering what prompted you to write it. Is it just a creative piece, or is this a statement of something you personally experienced?
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:13 pm
It's terrible.Pr0nogo wrote:Ever heard of Law-Abiding Citizen?thebrowncloud wrote: Reading the poem, my first thought was me wondering what prompted you to write it. Is it just a creative piece, or is this a statement of something you personally experienced?
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:13 pm
That's because I inspire, Lav. I inspire.Lavarinth wrote: I felt like I should be standing behind you making beat box noises.
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:23 am
Ey, fuck you too, budday.
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 9:27 am
@pr0nogo: The poem was incredible. Nice flow of the words, too. To me, it's talking about someone who has experienced something bad at the hand of the culprits and the evidence is right on them.
Close? Yes? No? Maybe so?
Close? Yes? No? Maybe so?
Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2010 11:20 am
Don't Encourage him.