Inhumanity (a poem)

GreatGodSajuuk · Post by **GreatGodSajuuk** » Thu Dec 31, 2009 2:30 pm

Also happy new goat!

DrumsofWar · Post by **DrumsofWar** » Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:27 pm

Zilla- wrote: so what was this supposed to be about?

Nas.

wibod · Post by **wibod** » Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:03 am

My president is black, my Lambo's blue
And I'll be goddamned if my rims ain't too
My momma ain't at home, and daddy's still in jail
Tryna make a plate, anybody seen the scale?

AA7Dragoon · Post by **AA7Dragoon** » Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:57 pm

Well I for one enjoyed reading your poetry, Pronogo.

Pr0nogo · Post by **Pr0nogo** » Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:22 pm

O, tnx.

thebrowncloud · Post by **thebrowncloud** » Mon Jan 04, 2010 1:44 pm

Reading the poem, my first thought was me wondering what prompted you to write it. Is it just a creative piece, or is this a statement of something you personally experienced?

Negi · Post by **Negi** » Tue Jan 05, 2010 1:39 am

Get a room, you two.

Archangel · Post by **Archangel** » Tue Jan 05, 2010 2:08 am

Guy writes a line
Makes it rhyme
Five beats makes his face shine.
But no one takes it
Makes it cheap
Some call it a heap
Some mistake it
I think it's fine
Don't whine.

HAH!

Gotta be tougher
Negi's a bluffer
All face and no grace
Expect that in a public place
like Campaign Creations
What a sensation
to share your thoughts
your words your emotions.
Son, you actin' all weak
gets you a demotion.

Pr0nogo, no-no
Cryin' 'cause they ain't buyin'
That path's a no-go.

Post a poem, bet your britches,
Inner talent brings out all the...eh...ehm...*cough*

Yeah, so...

Cheer up Pr0n. And listen to criticism 'cause you may learn something.

But don't criticize me 'cause I already know everything and if you think you have something to say to that, well I've already thought about it and that's why I said it. To lull you in to say what you think you'll say.

SO DON'T SAY IT.

Post by **Lavarinth** » Tue Jan 05, 2010 10:07 am

I felt like I should be standing behind you making beat box noises.

Pr0nogo · Post by **Pr0nogo** » Tue Jan 05, 2010 2:52 pm

thebrowncloud wrote: Reading the poem, my first thought was me wondering what prompted you to write it. Is it just a creative piece, or is this a statement of something you personally experienced?

Ever heard of Law-Abiding Citizen?

wibod · Post by **wibod** » Tue Jan 05, 2010 3:13 pm

Pr0nogo wrote:
thebrowncloud wrote: Reading the poem, my first thought was me wondering what prompted you to write it. Is it just a creative piece, or is this a statement of something you personally experienced?
Ever heard of Law-Abiding Citizen?

It's terrible.

Archangel · Post by **Archangel** » Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:13 pm

Lavarinth wrote: I felt like I should be standing behind you making beat box noises.

That's because I inspire, Lav. I inspire.

Negi · Post by **Negi** » Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:23 am

Ey, fuck you too, budday.

dreamerhorwitz · Post by **dreamerhorwitz** » Sun Jan 17, 2010 9:27 am

@pr0nogo: The poem was incredible. Nice flow of the words, too. To me, it's talking about someone who has experienced something bad at the hand of the culprits and the evidence is right on them.

Close? Yes? No? Maybe so?

Negi · Post by **Negi** » Sun Jan 17, 2010 11:20 am

Don't Encourage him.

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