Re: Inhumanity (a poem)
Posted: Wed Dec 30, 2009 9:36 am
Oh, ho, ho, I'm NOT leaving my door unlocked.
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Straight up shit is real and any day could be your last in the jungle
Get murdered on the humble, guns'll blast, niggaz tumble
The corners is the hot spot, full of mad criminals
who don't care, guzzlin beers, we all stare at the out-of-towners
They better break North before we get the four pounders, and take their face off
Represent ya'll represent! Queens Bridge!DrumsofWar wrote:Straight up shit is real and any day could be your last in the jungle
Get murdered on the humble, guns'll blast, niggaz tumble
The corners is the hot spot, full of mad criminals
who don't care, guzzlin beers, we all stare at the out-of-towners
They better break North before we get the four pounders, and take their face off
What does this mean? It may have five syllables in each line, but that's just an arbitrary restriction if there's no symmetry. Unless that was the point.Read it as 5 syllables per line except for 'They do not appear to be.'
I'll arbitrary YOUR symmetry.Milldawg wrote:What does this mean? It may have five syllables in each line, but that's just an arbitrary restriction if there's no symmetry. Unless that was the point.Read it as 5 syllables per line except for 'They do not appear to be.'
I see what you did.thebrowncloud wrote: I'll stay out of this.
This sounds ODDLY FAMILIARWhiplash! wrote: Btw I kinda read some of it but was just like UGGHHHHH so I stopped and made my post.
Ha ha ha!IskatuMesk wrote:This sounds ODDLY FAMILIARWhiplash! wrote: Btw I kinda read some of it but was just like UGGHHHHH so I stopped and made my post.
Oh wait, that's how I approach every single post!