Hi! I am new.

[Atom Heart Mother]

Premise sounds fine to me, but having to lose is going to turn people off.

Just don't tell anyone or make it winnable(to a degree)

[CowardI]

You never return to earth, you fail in that. But try to complete one final thing before you die.. (You have to play the campaign to know what).

[Marine]

What you say is what you say, I wanna see this. Tell me this though, is your campaign just one level in space? or on variety of places, planets space, platforms?

[CowardI]

It is a 10 episode campaign. You are in space, in the UED flagship, batteling on platforms, you enter a dark and scary infested zerg platform trying to destroy it, battle on an ash planet to protect crash sites of the UED ships and you are close up with kerrigan (witch is your last stand) in a old forgotten complex witch holds a few secrets. And those secrets is what you most try to destroy before you die. (IT IS NOT HYBRIDS AND IT IS NOT A WEPON WITCH CAN DESTROY THE GALAXY!!!!)

[Marine]

I hope your spelling will be well in the campaign.
But I dont think how the UED fleet could handle out all the way to the final battle since well, the Zerg fleet obliterated the crippled UED fleet. And how do you plan to show DuGalle killing himself?

[xen_thanatos]

Forgive me for changing the topic here,but...
Hi! I am new.

[CowardI]

You see Du Galle in the second episode. You enter the UED flagship to evacuate as many people as you can. And then you will go past Du Galle's quaters to find a data disc. When you recicve the disk you see his potrat and then you see a ghost and he get's killed. (The ghost is Du Galle) And then your charecter says "no!!!"

[Icekoldkilla]

to Xen_Thanatos

Hi welcome.