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The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 1:25 pm
by brokindreamz
Name: R.J.
Age: 21
Direction: I intend on focusing mainly on the Terrans and the aftermath of the Brood War. The affects of Mengsk rule in the Koprulu sector. Missions wll take place  on wide scale maps to tight space installation maps. Since I have been working on my campaign for almost 4 months, I've already completed 5 of the intended 6 maps.  I will also introduce some made up characters as well as exsisting ones.

The Story: After the events of the Brood War. Remnants of the Terran Confederacy slowly organized and became known as the New Confederate States (NCS). However, the Terran Dominion had already established themselves as the dominant Terran government. This unification of the Confederate states did not go unnoticed however. Multiple skirmishes broke out between the two factions and war yet again, broke out. Leading the battle against Arcturus Mengsk is an admiral name Walter Tesla, once a Admiral in the now dissolved Terran Conferdacy, Tesla  is a veteran of the war against the Dominion and now he's seeking vengance on Mengsk for the destruction of the Confederacy.
You are a captain in the NCS faction, you've already proven yourself through numerous battle and now you serve directly below Admiral Tesla. You wil play a part in admiral Tesla's plans against Mengsk. You and Tesla will lead a desperate struggle to bring down the Terran Dominion.

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Wed Jun 10, 2009 5:27 pm
by Campaign Creations
Approved.

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 1:08 am
by brokindreamz
I've pretty much finished everything, i just need to polish my work (look for bugs and grammer check). I've also come up with the final title, it will be called: DEFIANCE OF THE FALLEN. Here are some screens
[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 185405.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 185337.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 185302.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 185247.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 185227.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 185128.jpg[/imgwh]
I'll try and update regularly.

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:04 pm
by Dem0nS1ayer
I think the phrase "now I don't need to tell you that we are on the eve of battle" should be its own sentence.

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 2:37 pm
by Legion
Dem0nS1ayer wrote: I think the phrase "now I don't need to tell you that we are on the eve of battle" should be its own sentence.
And I am sure.

Anyway, good to hear you've made a lot of a progress. More screenies? :D

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 7:35 pm
by Marco
brokindreamz wrote: [imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 185227.jpg[/imgwh]
Aha!  One of my characters from my upcoming SC2 campaign is named Tesla.  I found it to be a very appropriate name for a man of science.

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 10:42 pm
by brokindreamz
Thanks for the posts and feedback, I should have screens up for the second mission soon. Still looking for bugs, checking errors in grammar.

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 12:41 am
by brokindreamz
New screens for the second mission and i've worked out various grammar issues and bugs on the first mission. enjoy!

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 201414.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 201524.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 201844.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 201956.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 202018.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 202127.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... 202133.jpg[/imgwh]


Check back for more updates soon.

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Fri Jun 26, 2009 11:47 pm
by brokindreamz
it has been sometime now since my last update. work has been hectic lately and now, i've finally worked out the minor bugs in mission three. here are some screens enjoy.

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n03-01.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n03-05.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n03-03.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n03-06.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n03-08.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n03-10.jpg[/imgwh]

i wish to refrain from leaving comments on the pics in order to preserve the story. i hope you've enjoyed the new screen, i'll have some more soon.

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 3:40 am
by Maglok
Looks busy.

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:35 pm
by brokindreamz
Looks busy.
yeah. in this mission, i was going all out building units and trying to overwhelm the enemy base. it didn't end well for me though.

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 6:06 pm
by brokindreamz
this is probably the most difficult mission i made, there were countless bugs that had to be fixed, it was really frustrating. well, without further ado, here are some screens from mission 4, enjoy!

This is the first part of the mission that gave me such a hard time.
[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n04-01.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n04-02.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n04-03.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n04-04.jpg[/imgwh]

That's all from this mission, i probably update soon!

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 4:21 am
by brokindreamz
Here is a quick update on the 5tn mission. I was testing the level of difficulty of the compute and considering this is the second to the last mission, it was just right. here are some screens.

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n05-01.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n05-02.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n05-03.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n05-04.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n05-04.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n05-06.jpg[/imgwh]

More screens to come!

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2009 8:41 am
by omega20
It looks promising. The terrain and unit placement looks really nice in those screenshots. ;)

P.S. The yellow Zerg air units from the second screen don't seem to be attacking the Terrans... are they supposed to be allies?

Re: The Rebellion (Working Title)

Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 6:12 pm
by brokindreamz
Well, this will be my last update. this is the last mission and i intend to make it a little harder than the rest. here are some screens, enjoy:

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n06-01.jpg[/imgwh]
Most of the screens i've shown so far i triy not to show much as i've already stated in my other posts.
[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n06-02.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n06-03.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n06-04.jpg[/imgwh]

[imgwh 640x480]http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/11/14 ... n06-05.jpg[/imgwh]

ill put up a link to download the whole map pack soon!