-> YES - Has a Judicator Zilous main character
-> YES - Judicator Zilous uses an arbiter
-> YES - Judicator Zilous is a protagonist
-> + Correct orthograph/grammar for most of the time
-> + Informs the player correctly of the events.
-> + Some story in the briefing that ties with the official lore and some game story
-> + Minimal text formatting
-> + Good thread updates (Well written information with screenshots)
-> + A few sounds in the briefing
-> + Credits to various helpers and sites (although not specific to who did what)
-> - Scenario's name conflicts with an existing campaign name on the very site of the contest. Thus the author technically should have checked and picked another name.
(Shalandar's Reclamation of Aiur : http://www.campaigncreations.org/starcraft/reclamation_of_aiur
-> + Triggers works mostly.
-> + Trigger comments
-> + Use of Locations and switches
-> - Too primitive complexity-wise for triggers
-> - Some odd bugs and some bugs seems to be plain neglected since they are too obvious
===MAPPING - LAYOUT
-> + The layout seems good overall.
-> + Had no trouble maneuvering the maps.
===MAPPING - BEAUTY
-> + Good overall (looks good but can look rushed and terrain might look a bit plain at times).
-> - Zero doodads (other than a few stair-type doodads)
Note : This doesn't influence directly the scores but might improve it
-> + Custom music
-> + Custom portraits
-> + Custom cursor (color change only)
-> + Custom extracted gas model (color change only)
-> + Custom new ability for Zilous (Time Pulse)
-> + Custom weapons (swaps and renames only)
Note : Might potentially influence negatively the campaign's scores.
-> - Too melee-based map
-> - Quite a few references to "Protoss" by Protoss characters (their own race).
Note : For the last drawback, I imply that no race would mention normally their own race. Ex : A Terran would say "We (referring to the Terran race or Terran faction) killed the Zerg." instead of "The Terran killed the Zerg".
Note : While Hyper Triggers were used, I didn't add it in the Triggering section since I don't see any real justification for them (more precisely any trigger that relies on very quick detection/re-execution)
Issue : "Unit Unplacable (Zerg Hydralisk)" error message right on scenario start.
Mod Bug : When researching Time Distortion (custom modded research), it shows "null" when hovering the mouse on the current research's icon in progress.
Mod Bug : Time Distortion research doesn't improve Zilous' Time Pulse's damage as it claims. It still does 200 damage before and after.
Issue : Looks odd in the briefing story that Zilous is all surprised about the recent events (for the time of the scenario) happening between Starcraft and Broodwar yet you are able to train Dark Templars and Corsairs (which logically they wouldn't be available yet lore-wise) in this scenario.
Bug : Mike can be rescued before the plot would allow it by manually sending a unit to his position.
Bug : Mike can be manually killed by the player before the plot involves him. Mike should be invulnerable until you rescue him manually or the plot give control of him to you.
Complain : Being able to build the Arbiter Tribunal is pointless if you can't create new arbiters.
Note : Somehow I managed to have a generic BW crash while playing the mod. Not sure of the cause other than possibly re-damaging a 0 HP mutalisk that recently emerged from an egg. Thus, I can't be sure if it was caused by BW or the mod itself.
Bug : Looks odd when the general turn blue and start attacking his "own army" (Orange) for a while (during the mini-cutscene) after you destroy the Ion Cannon.
Bug : Hero goliaths (which guards the general) stays invulnerable even when it is the time to kill the general (thus logically should become vulnerable).
Text (Briefing) : "The reclamation or Aiur?" instead of "The reclamation of Aiur?"
Text (Mission) : "actaully" instead of "actually"
Text (Mission) : Zilous repeats this once more : "Very well. Our control over this sector is nearly complete. We-"
Text (Mission) : "I'v" instead of "I've" (reference to "I have" shorten)
Text (Objectives) : "Mike, Zilous, and Khadiris msut
survive." instead of "Mike, Zilous, and Khadiris must survive." (for the menu one after destroying the Ion Cannon)